Wow that was so beautiful and romantic. I enjoyed reading every line that you wrote. Your really described how it feels to be in love. 5/5

I like this poem alot. I wrote one called "I'm yours" also, but i got the idea from the song. I do like this poem alot.

I liked how you used some spanish in your poem. I thought that was very unique. The only problem I had with it is that you used the present tense throughout the whole thing. You should look back through it and change some lines to the past tense. It confused me a little and I had to reread some lines, but overall it was good.

This is very romantic and passionate, it was so heartfelt. Great emotions running through this piece. The only thing I thought could have been improved was that the first lines in each stanza were repeated. I didn't really like it that much, but this was a good love poem. 4/5 from me, take care...

I like this i love romantic poems movies everything lol! great job!!! The spanish(espanol) was genuse!!!

Wish you can see my face when i read every word you wrote wish i were you in the same moment it just brough the sun back to my tought the rays of joy facing my broken heart missing the beautiful painful memories , its just began with a SIGH and following the traces of your foot prints its just feels sleeping inside of her heart creating the lips touchin second , falling from the edge of my life watching you sloping between of my hands just like the dust next to the shore and suddnley the waves of the ocean wash me away while i wake to find my self in the darkest momemt of the nightmare it hurts in very nice way to feel you even its hurts more to feel being away from you somehow wish i could express my feelings in the same way wish i could trun one minute back to die in her arms to never wake feeling the same way as now faint emotions cute face brown hair brown eyes beyond these unexplainble shinning stars overdose of love is the reason i hate my self for being alive till this momento goodbye no more sweet encadenado

This poem was so sweet and thoughtful... it describes being in love with some one very well... keep it up frenchy!!! ttyl megan

That was really good.
very sweet, thoughtful and heartfelt:]

keep it up:]
5/5

Dis reminds me of my f i wish he was my bf though excellent 5/5

I wrote a poem with the same title, different poem but this one reminded me of mine. I like yours and you are getting a 5/5 on this one.

Never mind, I forgot that I already read this one and commented the same thing lol.

I liked the repetition in this poem, the flow wasn't excellent, but the imagery was pretty good. The structure was great! Nice write, I really enjoyed the read, keep up the fantastic work.

Peace, Joe

This was a very cute poem. At first the structure scared me a little but I read it and it's cute. I Like it. The emotion behind it is plain to see. =]

5/5

-Ally