Wild hearts ( Parallelogram de Crystalline )

by Ingrid   Dec 22, 2008


Wild hearts

Like a storm
You swept me off my feet
Strong and raging wind of the deep south

Calm brooklet
Changed to a wild river
As you took a dive into it 's core

Horizon
Once so clear and serene
Now painted in passionate colors

Burning fire
Of raw, hot lust ablaze
Might burn us both eventually

Parallelogram de Crystalline is a poetry form created by Karan Naidu

This form consists of 4 verses 3 line in each verse. The syllable count for each stanza is 3,6,9. In this style of poem the beauty of a lover is compared with the nature and described...

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  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Wow! Such great imagery here Ingrid.
    I felt the fire coming out of your words.
    Very nicely penned indeed.
    Well done!

  • 15 years ago

    by SADADDY

    You have written this with such intense passion, thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.

    sadaddy

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Excellent use of Karan's new form. Vivid images you have portrayed with your words. The nice thing about the form and your use of it, is that each verse can stand alone as a poem of its own. Good job as usual. 5/5

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