No this is not a movie scene
No this is not just a dream
This is reality in the making
And you're my beloved Queen

This poem is juz fantastic, i like your creativity of using the camera works into ur poem and the flow was also very smooth
Excellent Job;)

Well this was totally amazing. One of my favourites from you i think. You wrote about questions that we all want answers to. Luckily, if it is meant to be, THEY will answer the questions for us :)
Just a couple of things i noticed,

I'm so inlove with you, your my only sunlight
^^
your should be you're
and maybe inlove should be two words.

Take your hand off the fastforward, your moving way to fast
^^ fastforward, i would write as fast forward.

Will you hold on tighter or let go of my hand?
I'm sorry but I need to know where I stand.
You say that I'm your everything, an angel so pure.
But what if you see a flaw, will you still be so sure?

^^ A great opening, it really set the reader up for a great poem. Really well done.
Ready set, lights, camera; action
is this all a movie scene?
Will you press the stop, eject
Is this all just a dream?

^^ My favourite stanza, it was very unique and it really added to the originality of your poem.

overall a great poem and i am glad i read it.
keep writing!
5/5

You are wonderful my friend *applauding* wonderful poem, movie or whatever you want it to be. I loved it

The title was really good; it made me ready to read a good poem and added a little sense of urgency of reading quickly.

Throughout the poem, I think a few commas were overlooked, which broke the flow up a little. Examples:

"Will you hold on tighter, or let go of my hand?"
"I'm sorry, but I need"

There is one typo in the fifth stanza: "I don't want to find out to [(should be too)] late what I could have realized".

The flow is great and the wording is great again as well. It really set a good image in my head when I was reading it.

After I read through it a few times, it seemed like a song that was never compeletly finished though. Repeating the third stanza made it seem like a good start to a song, but then it ended a little too early for that. You may wish looking at it again and consider finishing it as a song.

Could not find the beat/rhythm in your words.

I really like this poem. I'm not too fond of the beginning. For one reason and one reason only - it lacks words. I know that sounds a bit off. And, this is only my opinion, probably not everyone elses. I believe sometimes things need to be 'wordy' to sound better.

Will you hold on tighter, or let go of my hand?
I'm sorry, but I need to know where I stand.
You say that I'm your everything, an angel so pure.
But what if you see a flaw, will you still be so sure?

[Will you hold on tighter, or will you just let go?
I'm sorry, but where it is I stand, i really need to know.
You say that I'm your everything, an angel oh so pure.
But what if you find a flaw, will you still be so sure?]

Thanks for the advice and I will be changing it to those first two phrases. I appreciate your advice and opinion.

For me it was alrite. it was so touching like the last one i read. sumthing was missing from this poem.idk what but yeah. it was nice
4/5 for me.

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

You say that you will come for me when the time is right
I'm so in love with you, you're my only sunlight
Will I stumble in the dark, now my backs against the wall?
Will you be here to catch me before I fall?

^^^^These are lines many will be able to relate to. Sometimes it is so difficult keep the faith and you feel so lost...

I think this is a beauitful poem and I have no idea why someone downvoted you, Sasha!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid