Comments : Self Known Lie

  • 15 years ago

    by SADADDY

    Your sadness can be felt in the words you have expressed in this write…thank you for sharing your thoughts with us…
    Just a note: I believe you meant “matter” instead “madder” and you probably meant “We were together” instead of “We where together”. Nicely done, enjoyed the read, keep on writing.

    sadaddy

  • 15 years ago

    by mandy

    That was very beautiful! A couple spelling mistakes, but it was so wonderfuly put! The emotion was amazing, 5/5!!!

    -mandy :)