This almost made me cry..then again, i woke up like two minutes ago and am still vulnerable to lovey stuff. it's sweet. the kind of poem every girl wishes she could claim.

5/5

Wow this was filled with so much emotion it just blew me away! I could tell this came straight from you heart because each word and phrase you put together just tugged at my heart strings. I'm sure many could relate with what you expressed here and I sure am glad I read it. It all flowed so flawlessly and it didnt even seem like a long poem. The title was what caught my eye and made me want to read it so I applaud you that.

" swallowed down the heartbreak"
^I loved how you phrased this and the way it flowed off my tongue.

Well done!
*5/5* :]

:]
*huggles you*

Im always with you my polar bear.

I loved this,
you write really well and express the emotion so well it feels real to the reader.
well, to me atleast :P
good work
peace :]