Butterflies

by meganmarie   Dec 23, 2008


Butterflies flitting around inside
beating their wings as fast as her heart
kiss her again
they'll fly even faster
maybe one will even escape

butterflies dancing to the sound of your heart
while she listens to the beat
warm fire glistens
snuggled up close together
those butterflies dance once again

the butterflies stop for a moment all together
she closes her eyes and waits
i love you is whispered
butterflies fly the fastest
when you leave,
she thinks one escaped.

;;for nick, i love you;;

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  • 15 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    I love the ending.. how it says that one butterfly escaped? Feels that way sometimes, doesn't it :) I loved your poem to the fullest. Great job.

  • 15 years ago

    by anand singh

    Beautifully penned piece of love poetry.I'm sure nick is proud to be the recepient of such wonderful write.
    An enjoyable read.
    Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem.
    Paul...

  • 15 years ago

    by Conrad

    I think i can wrap it up in one word: AWW. Is that a word? idk. I think you did a Great job though, and so does my immaginary friend.

  • 15 years ago

    by Benny Boi

    Very well written, also so different and very touching! Keep this up ;) 10/10

    Good Write

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