by Lemon Squeezy Dec 23, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
I stand trapped between two choices, |
by Victoria
I always love reading other poems that I can really relate to!! ...excellent job! |
by Good Enough
Never give up. good poem. i like how your going to stand no matter what 5/5 |
by Mary
Great poem.......i love the flow and the rhyme scheme. what i love the most is how i can relate to it. Two choices. Both seem right. But one is wrong. Great Job keep it up :D |
Not bad not bad |
by Sylvia
The decision to do the right or wrong thing is a constant battle for all of us, if we just admit it. Sometimes we make the wrong choices but the "One Thing I do, I continue to stand." Excellent write and it flows well. |