Comments : Hey! I'm Still Standing

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Interesting write... I interpreted it as a fight beetween your inner self... trying to decide what is write and what is wrong ... yes it is difficult ...

    Whenever I'm faced with issues unplanned,
    One Thing I do, I continue to stand.
    ^^ these lines depicts the courage and optimism inside you ... the will to go on...

    wonderful write :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    The decision to do the right or wrong thing is a constant battle for all of us, if we just admit it. Sometimes we make the wrong choices but the "One Thing I do, I continue to stand." Excellent write and it flows well.

  • 15 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Not bad not bad

    Your Servant:
    D. Johnson.

  • 15 years ago

    by Mary

    Great poem.......i love the flow and the rhyme scheme. what i love the most is how i can relate to it. Two choices. Both seem right. But one is wrong. Great Job keep it up :D

  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Never give up. good poem. i like how your going to stand no matter what 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Victoria

    I always love reading other poems that I can really relate to!! ...excellent job!
    :)
    -Tor