I love this, so full of emotion, depth, feeling.

its getting so old,
cutting and bleeding,
its not enough to cure,
only the pain its feeding.

^ thats my favourite stanza, its so very true. this is an amazing poem

--lovedroughtmelody

Such a sad but beautiful write, awesome job I really like this poem it's very well written and the rhyming flow is perfect. The only little thing you could do is to change all youR i's into capps ( I ) =] but really other than that this poem is really good 5/5
Great Work ^^

So emotional!
It was sad yet beautiful
I loved how your rhythem was on key!
Love it Hun!!
5/5

Very good, as all the other are. totally fits my feelings right now. funny how your poems can match my moods almost exactly. always have done that though

They say that in order to start anew, we first have to hit rock bottom. You have to feel that click that says it's time to change your direction or perish...I think that many times in life we go downhill, for whatever reason..be it losing a relationship, your health, a child, parents, you name it....we feel like losing ourselves in our grief then, until the day comes we find the strength to pick ourselves up again.
Letting out what you feel is a very important part of healing..

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid