by Nula Dec 23, 2008
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Black and white, yellow and red, |
Yeah, I hope they listen to you dear friend! This is all we need to live peacefully with each other! |
by AnCi
There is a true message in this poem that I wish everyone would take to their heart. |
by Hollymariee
I like the idea , it's not something most people write about . I think you could make it more powerful very easily ... But i'll still give you 5/5 okay ? Good job . |
by AnCi
Excellent point!! =) |
by PoetryKnight
It is like a rap, lol. Nice, keep it up. 5/5 |