by Not Enough
AaWw it's cute... it seems kind of sad, but happy at the same time. It has a great flow! And the rhymes work very well.. |
by Nobodys Hero
This is a really sweet heartfelt poem ^^ |
by Annaam
I like it... It's sweet and nice... :). Ur strOng feelings and emOtiOns are very well pOrtrayed in this pOem. |
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by M I L L Y
I like this poem and since is not finished yet i gave u a 4 .. so im guessing you gonna add a lil more ... keep up the good work |
by Faithless
Well for me this poem is just full of sweet serenity. I like the idea that you penned it down in a straight forward manner.I also like the idea how you infuse some dialogs into ur poem, it makes the reader easier to relate to the poem. It was certainly a delightful to read.Keep it up |
by Cyber Saiyan
Good poem. |
A very cute and heartfelt piece. The emotions came straight from your heart :] This piece was simple, but still beautiful and very hopeful. The flow was here and there, but still good. Great write :] |