by Jennifer Dec 24, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Am I still in your life |
by Saving Grace
Aww i love it! Very emotional from the start to the finish. Really wondeful write, great work! 5/5 |
by He is the Reason
Ok, I really loved reading that. I liked the flow and the emotions running through it, I felt it all the way through :) Made me a little sad but thats because I relate but you wrote it beautifully with an upbeat feel to it actually :) I loved it from beginning to end. 5/5 |
Aww cute! couple suggestions make it into stanza's and put in punctuation! other than that great! 5/5 |