Aww cute! couple suggestions make it into stanza's and put in punctuation! other than that great! 5/5

Ok, I really loved reading that. I liked the flow and the emotions running through it, I felt it all the way through :) Made me a little sad but thats because I relate but you wrote it beautifully with an upbeat feel to it actually :) I loved it from beginning to end. 5/5

~*Rhea*~

Aww i love it! Very emotional from the start to the finish. Really wondeful write, great work! 5/5