Notice!

by Jennifer   Dec 24, 2008


I feel all broken up,
yes broken up,
shattered into pieces,
I feel like giving up,
yes giving up,
lost beyond control,
shattered into pieces,
lost beyond control,
no matter what you do,
Its never going to change,
so just give up,
my life I feel is nothing,
so bleak, so dark so gloomy,
I just cant control,
all the pain that is inside
so I cut and try to forget it,
but that only helps for awhile,
but now I dont seem to care,
about my life or what goes on,
all I seem to care about,
is for you to know whats wrong.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Very emotional pice, and very relatable. Although, i think the flow needs a bit of work, and perhaps it would flow and sound a bit better if you didnt repeat some of those lines at the start? But it is powerful and well written. Keep it up.