OMFG!!!
DUDE!!
That is .. AWESOME!!
I LOVE IT
That is really really good!!
Godamn you!
=P

ily .. x0x

Wow, I'm speachless. I have death dreams aswell, though they aren't much like this. That was heartbreaking and tear jerking. If your mother loved you enough to be with you in your after life then you must be sure in your subconsiousness that she loves you very much. Please continue it, I'm rather interested. The flow and rhyming was perfection. I really enjoyed it.
5/5, Nice work.

This is very sad but really well written and kept the reader wanting to finish it, I think it is is actually perfect the way it is, flawless. 5/5, Em