by isabel
If I was your boy |
by Hollymariee
Um . This is very chiche .. As well as awfully odd at some points . |
by SashaMirage
Wow, you obviously really love this girl and it glows throughout your poem. I really liked the opening stanzas that you wrote, especially the part about the genie. That was really clever and had me wanting to read more. |
by Mary
Hey |
by Faithless
This is absolutely one of the greatest love poem confessions i've ever read... the way you make it rhyme and flow was flawless that's filled with truth and honesty in ach and every lines and stanza.Indeed it was beautifully penned down and i bet the girl who u wrote for would be please to read it |
by kelleyana
I like the original side of your poem you puts in mind fantasy and reality. This stanza caught my attention, |
Awwww... this was awww.. and beautiful from beginning to end. i love it. hehehe.. nicelt done. it made me smile a lot cuz it reminded me of Jj awww.. and i thank you for that. amazing job truly a 5/5 |
Great poem!! Makes me melt every time!!! I wish u were MY BOY!!! LOL |
by Cyber Saiyan
First impression, the title is kind of "rap-song-ish"; not exactly a bad thing, but it sets a awkward mood. |
by The Queen
So Jan is deeply inlove with this gurl hah? hahaha..Just kidding.. |