Very deep poem, well done i liked it xx

OMG.What a wonderful poem.It was so sad and so touching...I deeply feel you and I can see how much you love this person and loneliness is a very bad feeling.Insha'llah he won't leave you...

Excellent.5\5...

Waw, very touching one that comes from the heart. love is beautiful, yet when it's gone away or about to leave it can be so bitter. well done, kel.

I agree with the others. This poem is really deep... The first 4 lines are very classy, love it.