Hey you know what this poem kindda reminds me of Queen's Bohemian Rhapsody
I like the way you start it off with a short rhyming poem then venture on to introducing yourself and how you explore your theme in tyour poetries then ends off with questions and your answer.I think this idea is very original of you to infuse all of this elements into 1.

Excellent Job
5/5

"I wow those with the way I can express the senses."

"Those" seems out of place, I think you could clean this line up a bit. The are a few other places where I think you could omit a word or two but on the whole I think you have done an excellent job, it was a very enjoyable read, nice work.

"With a silent boom,
That echos through their minds"

wow. just wow. you're right. when i read a poem i really like, it feels like it sends a shock wave straight to my emotions and hits my heart. your poem didn't exactly do this for me, but i feel like you described that feeling of reading a good poem very well. and your "pep talk" kinda worked. 'cause now i really want to read an inspirational heart felt poem. so i can feel that "Silent Boom echo through my mind."

^you should quote yourself on that