At Your feet I rest ( Senryu )

What a great line Ingrid 'In You I found me.'
You really are the Mistress of the short poems!
Well done. A great, short write!

Your words are truly captivating which holds deeper meaning, well though we never met him physically, it is he whom we turn to when we are in need, and forever will he be our guiding light

Excellent Job
5/5 from me

Dear beautiful Ingrid..
a wonderful write you penned here.
I'm not really an expert of the senryu nor the Haiku..but I could tell from the first line that you did a wonderful job.
I love the wording of the first line too much..it really got to me !!
Haven't read your stuff in a while..I feel sorry for that..

Keep the work up
Much love

What meaningful words you have written here, when I first read this I was thinking God too, or a close friend or sibling. Beautiful work, very touching and lots of emotion in this senryu. Nice job, 5/5 from me, take care...

The first impression I got when I read this is that looking to God, you found your true self and have come out into His light. Once again a form that uses so few words to express your feelings and you have done it very well. Good job. 5/5