by Sylvia
The first impression I got when I read this is that looking to God, you found your true self and have come out into His light. Once again a form that uses so few words to express your feelings and you have done it very well. Good job. 5/5 |
What meaningful words you have written here, when I first read this I was thinking God too, or a close friend or sibling. Beautiful work, very touching and lots of emotion in this senryu. Nice job, 5/5 from me, take care... |
by Nee
Dear beautiful Ingrid.. |
by Faithless
Your words are truly captivating which holds deeper meaning, well though we never met him physically, it is he whom we turn to when we are in need, and forever will he be our guiding light |
What a great line Ingrid 'In You I found me.' |
by Ingrid
I'm a Mistress alright! ;) |