Wow,what an amazing piece.It was really wonderful ,amazing and so touching.

You are a wonderful human and an excellent poet.Well done.

Give you my vote.5\5...

A very deep and meaningful write. Filled of words of wisdom, to never lose hope no matter what, strive for the best despite of the hindrance along the way. Very inspiring i should say although there was a lil bit of sadness and negativity at the end.

I loved this poem the name fits well with the big stanza its very symbolic and descriptive.
Nature played a big part in this too. Great job

Very powerful and you did an excellent job at describing here. Flows well and over all its an amazing write. keep it up.