Winter tree ( Haiku )

by Ingrid   Dec 24, 2008


Cold, leafless branches
Snow, storm and hail wear you down
Saving strength for spring

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  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    I just love to see nature from your perspective it just give me the sense of hope they way you penned it down

    Excellent Job
    5/5 from me;)

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I read this and applied it to myself since the snow and stormy weather does wear me down in winter and I am indeed saving strength for the spring. I never thought of it this way before. Good job. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Fran

    I loved the idea of hope in the last line. Well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Aww loved this piece... beauty mixed with inspiration and courage ... loved the last line...

    wonderfully penned...
    keep writing..

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    How wonderful to read, really great imagery that appeared in my mind! Your wording was excellent, and so much was said in this well-written haiku. Take care and have a Merry Christmas!