Comments : Shazza (collab)

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Awww we did our 4th collab on Christmas how sweet...hehe yeah who would have tot that we would turn a joke into a poem...it couldn't be funnier if i were to wrote it with someone else... I had a great laugh writing with you;)

  • 15 years ago

    by Ashley

    Awesome poems you guys!!

    Shazza, Shazza always hungry be it day or night
    She sneaks into the kitchen right after her mom says good night
    When she's angry give her more food then she'll be polite
    If you don't give her all your dinner they're will be a fight

    That was the best stanza... so funny.

    The eighth wonder of the world, she covers up the moonlight
    she helps the sugar, honey and candies unite

    That part was a bit choppy, maybe a word
    like forever or sweetly in between candies and unite would be better... but whatever. Overall, amazing! You guys rock!