Comments : Tired

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow that was great dahl.
    Never cut to escape your pain.. now that you have found poetry, there is no need for the knife.
    I cant seem, to forget you,
    I cant seem, to let you go,
    ^^ im not sure if there should be a comma there.. i think it would be fine read as:
    I cant seem to let you go.

    Im tired of this feeling,
    Im tired of the pain,
    Im tired of dealing,
    With loving you again.

    ^^ Great stanza.
    Awesome work

  • 15 years ago

    by isabel

    A really breath-taking poem... Too easy to relate...
    Some things are just so hard to let go...

    Beautiful write

    *keep up*
    isabel

  • 15 years ago

    by heartbrokengrl

    This one is pretty good i like it

  • 15 years ago

    by heartbrokengrl

    This one is pretty good i like it