by CrossCut Dec 25, 2008
category :
Life, society /
about society
A gun to my temple |
I like how you start off your poem by listing ways of ending your life. I like how you experimented with this piece twisting it with a slice of your life.Great Job |
by Good Enough
You shouldnt give these people what u want. they dont deserve anything. good job on getting the flow and with every line i can feel emotion 5/5 |
by My Name Is Mouse
Aww, is this about bullying? |