I thought that ur poem was really good. Honestly, at 1st I didn't understand what u were writing. Or what u were trying 2 say. I had 2 read it twice over 2 basically get it. lol But I still don't get it all the way. =P But what I did understand I thought that it was really good. I loved the rhyming, and the style. The way u versed it. Not every1 writes poems like u. And I thought that was neat. The only thing that I think that u would have 2 work on is letting every1 understand. But that doesn't take away from ur poem cuz in itself it was good. =)