An ocean of Love

by kelleyana   Dec 26, 2008


Some says there are plenty of fishes in the sea,
but among all those fishes you're the one that is designed for me,
Of that my heart agree and my love for you I guaranteed

You'd set a permanent place in my mind
Full dedication right from the start,
When you handed me your fragile heart
So I dare handle with care

Our bodies came in contact and communicates sincerity
and confidence
No wonder how you'd first found my soft spot
Your succulent words attracts me and I became excited like a bee
that my entire being aroused by its flavor, a feeling
That I'll always remember

The blazing energy of your eye brings to my mind
Passionate thoughts of togetherness
Your warmth smile like a rising sunset upon a mountain top,
Then our eyes introduces to our hearts
This day you handed me a bouquet of roses
Your body language makes me quickly understand
It's meaning of romantic feelings and your desire to go beyond our friendship

Emotion takes over and the most touching phrase slips from my lips, "I love you", gazing at me then
Whispering in my ear, "Baby, I love you too".
A pledge in the name of our heart
Like a beautiful plant that needed to be watered and nurtured to bring fourth good fruits of eternal love, caring, joy and devotion

Since then we're swimming in an ocean of love
Thanks to the sky above for giving me such a beloved like you.

kelleyana

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  • 15 years ago

    by Kaila

    Well I thought the flow was off. You may want to try to do the syllabol count method. Where each line should be close in syllabol count. It will help you edit and make your poem easier to read. I liked the idea of this poem. It was very relatable but, I'm not sure on your english so maybe that's it but I sensed in accent in this poem. Which for me was cool because, I felt like a different person while reading it but I don't know if that would put other readers off. Please keep writing
    4/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    You have created a work of art with this subtle rhyme and flawless flow

    outstanding imagery

  • 15 years ago

    by D Jon Versatino

    This is wonderful. I love it!

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Your words speak of such commitment, dear Kelleyana.
    On can only dream of finding a love that deep. I am happy for you that you did:)
    Have a blessed 2009 with your husband and son.

    Much love,

    5/5 Ingrid
    ps I deleted one fav and added you!

  • 15 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    True emotions are spread all over 5/5

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