by kelleyana Dec 26, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Some says there are plenty of fishes in the sea, |
by Kaila
Well I thought the flow was off. You may want to try to do the syllabol count method. Where each line should be close in syllabol count. It will help you edit and make your poem easier to read. I liked the idea of this poem. It was very relatable but, I'm not sure on your english so maybe that's it but I sensed in accent in this poem. Which for me was cool because, I felt like a different person while reading it but I don't know if that would put other readers off. Please keep writing |
You have created a work of art with this subtle rhyme and flawless flow |
This is wonderful. I love it! |
by Ingrid
Your words speak of such commitment, dear Kelleyana. |
True emotions are spread all over 5/5 |