Something real

by J u l e s   Dec 27, 2008


You make me feel incredible
feelings unexplained
You give me reasons to feel alive
my heart has yet been chained

Chained onto the road of love
with you I want to travel
take my hand and hold it tight
let this love begin to unravel

This time feels so different
something more complete
You truly make me believe
that your love i do recieve

With words I want to tell
feelings I want to reveal
Your in my heart and in my mind
you make this love feel real

[[ haven't written in so long. so yeah this is pretty crappy ]]

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    Julia, you may not have written in awhile but you still put it out there. I love this, but you knew I would. I really like the verse

    With words I want to tell
    feelings I want to reveal
    Your in my heart and in my mind
    you make this love feel real

    This is you all over gurl. Good work. 5/5............Kisses....