Well, this is a great poem. I'd have to say it's well written. I liked how you re-wrote the first stanza into the last one. I don't think it belongs under 'cyber love' people aren't really looking for that under this catergory. But, it hit home for me. (: Great job.

Lovin' this poem. great job. keep it up and great to see yeah smile!! yes just keep yeah head up high!