Tantalizing Tigers (Complex Alliterisen)

by Sylvia   Dec 27, 2008


Fanciful and fearless flexible felines.
Cunning if curious, scandalously scrupulous.
Focused, ferocious, searching and seeking.
Pitiful prey, will not be convincingly caught,
terribly tired by the tigers bold bite.
Teeth tightly clamped and bitterly biting down,
simply smothering, kindly killing game.

Copyright © 2008 Sylvia All Rights Reserved
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The Alliterisen (Complex and Rhyming), a form created by Udit Bhatia, is a simple seven-lined poem with a specific syllable pattern and two alliterations per line. For example: Glorious Graves, and wonderful waves. Alliteration is the succession of similar consonant sounds. They are not recognized by spelling, but rather by sounds.

The syllable structure for the Complex Alliterisen is as follows: (which allows for infinite syllable sequences.) x is any number you want to start with, then follow the addition or subtraction for the next line.

1st line- x syllables
2nd line- x+2 syllables
3rd line- x-1 syllables
4th line- (x+2)-1 syllables
5th line- x-2 syllables
6th line- (x+2)-2 syllables
7th line- x syllables
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  • 15 years ago

    by Fran

    A skillful use of alliteration and some evocative imagery. Well written.

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This looks like an interesting form and I also
    like how you have described the whole scene
    within this form..excellent work!

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    So many images come to mind reading this!
    What a beauty this poem is, Silvia..adorable format!
    I love tigers, they are so beautiful, wild and untamed..I love their royal air and their fearless approach to life. Yep...my kind of animal, lol.

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid