Birthday Grieve

by Faithless   Dec 27, 2008


For every start of a new year
I always look forward to your birthday
Thinking up ways of how to surprise you
Presenting to you gifts that are more than it's value

Though you never seem to remember mine
I always assume that you're busy occupying time
Working on overtime and irregular shifts
Wearing you out until your body couldn't be lifted

I never expected anything from you
I just want to thank you for making my wish come true
For letting me spend my time with you
I'll always cherish the moments we had at different venues

Now that you've moved on
I hope that all your past miseries are also gone
I hope that your new love will always be there
for you whenever you need a shoulder to cry on

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Aw! this was so sad, Azzza...but so well written!

    I never expected anything from you
    I just want to thank you for making my wish come true
    For letting me spend my time with you
    I'll always cherish the moments we had at different venues

    ^^

    I have these feelings too about someone, I know so well how you mean them..

    An excellent poem with so much feelings portrayed and very sweet at that!

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by jLegendc

    AWWWW! this is a really sad poem... remembering a bday for someone you once loved.. the msg inside this poem shows how you really loved that person.. especially this stanza
    "I never expected anything from you
    I just want to thank you for making my wish come true
    For letting me spend my time with you
    I'll always cherish the moments we had at different venues"

    that's a really sweet thing to say... but yenno everyone expects a lil sumthing from their lover that's y we get disappointed sumtimes.. it's natural.. well anywayz.. GOOD POEM! =]

  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Wow. This is an amazing poem, i really like the way you put the emotion into it, really heart felt and deep. breathtakingly beautiful work
    5/5 from me

  • 15 years ago

    by SweetGrief

    Wow! It's amazing, you definitely have a way with words, perfect rhyme, perfect words...
    it's hard moving on ha?!
    Good and amazing job 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Although you weren't expecting any present from this person, deep down you'd like she shows some appreciations. You always remember her birthday, yet she does not think of yours. Little things hold the most meanings, so somewhere there were thoughts in the back of your mind, telling yourself maybe you were the one who care most. I enjoy so much your write. Very well done5/5, kel.

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