I like the idea that these words are raw that came straight pouring out from the heart.
Well i just hope that you do not feel this way about urself

Take care
-Azzza

Don't mind people hun, you don't need friends who treat you this way...
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Ya Rabb it's difficult when u get depressed really it is...u start to see things which r not the real things, u start to feel u r good 4nothing, that none loves u or take care of u...but despite all is it not that way ! Remeber my dear our happiness depends only of our way of thinking abt things in our lives.Allah Hakim behind that pain should be something good !

Heba, your poem is great and you express your emotions very well. I can really feel your sadness. I hope if this is only a poem and not your thoughts because you have such a beautiful personality and everyone sees this! 5/5

Heba well done.very nice poem.

Very well expressed poem; i can feel each word u say, however u must NOT be weak n prefer 2go away, u rather try 2find the one who deserves u n ignore all others.. 5/5
Regards,
Shokry

I just ran across your poem. How sad :( I hope by now you're feeling better... you are young and have the entire world to explore.
Take Care of yourself
and remember you are never alone
God Bless
Cindy

Hard feelings , i liked the poem and the rhythm a lot , but i really hope that ur current feeling is not so bad like this, i hope u start having different look to the word around u if this poem really describe ur current mood.

Very nice poem.. it flows well right

This piece describes you as a person and what you were going through perfectly! Heba, you know I love you and care about you, you do have people that care as much as I do too. Don't listen to those who wish to crush you and let you down.
As for the poetry, I think you should organize your rhymes more. It'll help with the rhythem of the poem and its flow.

Keep writing love...

"to sleep . . . perchance to dream.
Aye, there's the rub."
- Shakespeare

Better to sort it out here than chance what happens after.