Fabulous. as per usual. it was totally true as well. 5/5. amzing. keep it up. ~KM~

Wow... Beautiful stuff, you're so good. It was a great lesson in it's very own way.

5/5

This poem was great, I loved how you learned in life that it may seem that youre really having a hard time, but theres people out there who are much worse off.. it takes a lot to realize that. Repetition in this piece was quite effective, the point you were trying to get across was clear, the repeated stanza was wonderful.. it was like you were trying to emphasize it, and I thought it was something truly that needed to be repeated.. so well done with that. Hm, not much to say. You did a good job.. you taught us all a leason here that I hope opens some peoples eyes.

5/5.

I really like this poem because It's full of so much emotion and self-questioning. I like how it progresses and then you start to put in self discovery and understanding. I loved the repitition of the stanza. It really highlighted the message of your poem and added a kind of mystery and essence to it I think. I really love the way you wrote this, and the message involved. Great job...Wonderful poem. Keep it up. 5/5