I'm inflamed by the neurotic
obsession which have
confined my heart.

^^ I love the beginning. BUT, 'which have'? Shouldn't that be 'which has'? OR 'neurotic
obsessions'?
I personally think that you should just put an s on the end of obession - have sounds better than has would sound in these particular lines.

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This poem is defintely written amazingly. I don't know if it's thought - out or just written quickly, but either way it seems thought -out and yet at the same time like it just came out smooth and solidly. I absolutely loved how you pieced it together and the word choice that you used; 'my charity', 'I'm no believer in beating in unison and yet I let
my heart beat away.' , ' i was never a believer in complexity, although i do believe in your heart.' - I loved all 3 of those parts. I thought that they brought the poem together. I liked how you kind of said, in ways, that you changed for your Rubik's Cube and did/believed things you normally wouldn't do or believe.

I'll be back to this piece as soon as I have more free time to leave a thoughtful comment, but I just wanted to say how much I like it. Intelligent, refreshing and such a beautiful write, Mel. Excellently done.

This poem is full of 'I'. Not good. Anyways... it doesn't matter in this site!

A beautiful masterpiece, the emotions were excellent, very unique poem, that was very deep and meaningful. 5/5 from me, this was a pleasure to read! Take care, keep writing, always and forever...