That was very good, however, I may be missing your point, but you seem to be contradicting yourself:
“About thinking life is long because it comes with a price”
Then you put:
“Don't waste the life you have or live it too little
Live your life one day at a time because it's very brittle”
As I quoted in the first sentence; if you think life is long then don’t you enjoy it? But then, as I quoted in the second sentence; if you think life is long, and then “live your life one day at a time” than it’s the same thing you’ve said before? And when you’re “playing games” and est. aren’t you enjoying your life then too? But the confusing part is that you’re talking about ending your life early, and I could not understand how that fit into the rest.
I understand most of your point, and I know when I write stories I have so many good ideas that I end up writing a whole bunch of things that are swell, but end up making not a whole lot of sense. Write what you feel, but try planning out what exactly it is that you want to write about. It’s especially important when sharing your poetry with others.

- mandy :)

(sorry about the random squares.. I don't know why it did that)