Bisque Doll

by Talie   Dec 28, 2008


Not your lovely Bisque Doll
Never have been after all,
Dress me up and make me talk
Looky Daddy, now watch me walk.

With my lovely curls - my dress in place
My hair is bright and shining - no messy trace
Now watch my lovely Bisque face break.

Not your lovely Bisque Doll
Never have been after all,
Now cut my strings and watch me fall
With this knowledge realize this
I'm not your lovely, little Bisque Doll!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Teria

    "With my lovely curls - my dress in place
    My hair is bright and shining - no mess trace
    Now watch my lovely Bisque face break."
    - Obviously the poem wouldn't be good without these lines. But the last one, I don't quite think fits there. IT does but I think that it'd be good on it's own or if you changed the other two lines a bit (which I absolutely loved) I wish I could suggest not changing a thing - all three lines are perfect. Just not together. (The first two are, the last one isn't).

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