Comments : Remember

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    How strange that I should read this poem this morning. I have been remembering things we did as children and how things were back then. This added to my list of things to remember. Thank you for arousing more memories. Excellent write. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Sunset closes her eyes
    Waiting for lovers to revisit
    Once again to hear her stories
    Chanted softly by the wind

    ^^ The most beautiful stanza to me:)
    This poem breathes melancholy and it's so soft, almost like a breeze..
    Very beautiful, Deana!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid