THIS ISNT THE WAY TO LIVE !!!!!

by Chynna   Dec 28, 2008


He grew up in a world were violence was the key 2 every young one growing up in the streets the key 2 succses and possibiltys..
None of them really started chasing there dreams some of his friends got killed some run away some never found til this day some never spoke some got locked up but thats what he fought was life. holding a gun and carring a knife .. but noone ever taught him about right and wrong he was young growing up in this world alone his mum didnt love him his dad left him what was he 2 become he mixd with the wrong crowd spent his time in care on the streets days where he was struggling and striving 4 somethink 2 eat he was 9 when he started doing drugs robbing smoking killing.. never really had a girl 2 love .. this was his life never did he try and get out of dis life he was in because he fought dis was lyf.. but a few yrs later he realised this was all a joke the day he felt panic and scared the day he tried 2 run away from his life .. 1 hit him he dropped now his living a different life and better life.....

only smart people will get this poem !!!!!

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  • 15 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    I get it; does this make me smart. wow; bloody oath I'm intelligent lol.
    This sounded to me more like a rap song than a poem (and that wasn't in a negative way). Your style of writing would probably go in line with Immortal Technique . nice work `` peace.

  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    So he killed himself to actually live. wow! that was sumthing right there. i can actually see everything when i was reading this. him with his gun on the right n knife on his life. amazing job u have done here. keep it up!

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

    p.s im not smart i think... idk hmm.... yeah.. i lost myself now laterz..