So he killed himself to actually live. wow! that was sumthing right there. i can actually see everything when i was reading this. him with his gun on the right n knife on his life. amazing job u have done here. keep it up!

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

p.s im not smart i think... idk hmm.... yeah.. i lost myself now laterz..

I get it; does this make me smart. wow; bloody oath I'm intelligent lol.
This sounded to me more like a rap song than a poem (and that wasn't in a negative way). Your style of writing would probably go in line with Immortal Technique . nice work `` peace.