The fog (Tanka)

This is a dark poem Ingrid, and filled me with terror!
Some good imagery here in such a short poem.
Well done.
(I'll need to keep the light on tonight! Aarrgghhaa!)

This is my first Tanka to read (as far as I can remember).
that was really good..I like the title, reminds me of the movie, hehe.
last line was really good, connecting the poem all together and making it even darker !
that was a good read, even though I'm not good at criticizing Tanka's
Write on =)
xx

You have captured fog very well. It does cause terror and feels evil and it gets thicker and thicker. Sometimes it feels like it is smothering you. Good Job. 5/5

Excellent tanka, very intriguing and the word choice really set the scene perfectly. Great verbs and adjectives, what a creative write! Nice work, take care and have a Happy New Year!