Excellent tanka, very intriguing and the word choice really set the scene perfectly. Great verbs and adjectives, what a creative write! Nice work, take care and have a Happy New Year!

You have captured fog very well. It does cause terror and feels evil and it gets thicker and thicker. Sometimes it feels like it is smothering you. Good Job. 5/5

This is my first Tanka to read (as far as I can remember).
that was really good..I like the title, reminds me of the movie, hehe.
last line was really good, connecting the poem all together and making it even darker !
that was a good read, even though I'm not good at criticizing Tanka's
Write on =)
xx

This is a dark poem Ingrid, and filled me with terror!
Some good imagery here in such a short poem.
Well done.
(I'll need to keep the light on tonight! Aarrgghhaa!)