Well this poem was beautifully penned down, you have taken the readers the journey of how is it to be the person who was being left by a guy for another girl...

But, I'm begging you,
oh I'm begging you please
turn around and look at me.

-I like the way you end the poem...which you try to see the slim hope that he would go back to you

Excellent Job
5/5 from me

IF I wre the lover it was intended for I can't see how that I could resist a second look

U did great with the emotions, i liked the last part. It emphasizes ur hope of him turning back althought you know that 'she' was all he see. keep writing

First of all I'd like to say this is a great poem that I think many people including myself can relate to.
When reading your poem I could really feel your pain and the longing you felt for the other person.
I rather liked your word choice and thought you had a strong start and ending, well done =]
I liked the third stanza most, mostly for personal reason thought but over all I believe every stanza was well put together.
Good job hun.Keep it up. 5/5!