Awww.... this was a lovely and sad piece you wrote here.

As those memories are fading away,
The thought of you decreases each day.
Still, I always want you to stay,
Till all my hair turns gray.

^very bueatifullie writen. I wouldnt change a word here. it's perfect how it is. the flow was just great. memories seem like they are fading away but they will always be with you till ur hair turns gray.

Sometimes I want to call and say hi,
But I'm too afraid even just to try.
I will never understand why,
It always makes me wanna cry.

^you'll never know until you try. dnt be too afriad to try. you have a great way with word here. simple but yet elgent. =]

I should listen to what they say,
I shouldn't delay.
I know pretending isn't the way.
So, I'll tell you what's in my mind today.
I MISS YOU, J.

^missing someone sucks. i'm missin my bestf right now while i was readin. times i feel mad at him for makin me mis him a bunch, times i just remember wen he made me laugh and smile. you did another amazing job here.
5/5
TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

I love how you wrote this poem.. it made me a lil emotional, im going throw this right now. you did an amazing job! I Love It

<3 Dominique