You're my missing piece

Those twinkling lights in the gloomy sky
Are they the same stars we starred that night?
They look pale and about to die
Why can't they be so bright?

^i agree with the comment above me. gloomy sky is a kool and new word to decribe the sky. first i have ever read. intreges the reader to keep on going. sorry if my spellof words suck. just yeah sorry..

The song by "Regina Spektor" called "The Call"
Is it the same song I used to listen?
It sounds so stupid and droll
Why can't it be nice and pleasant?

^hmm... you made me think here. i get what u r sayin but yet im confused in my mind.

This classic "Family Feud" game
I can't believe we played till dawn
This is so lousy and lame
Why can't it be interesting and fun?

^thatz cute. it's a bit boring but yet you keep on going. bring back memories this part =]

I think I know the answer
I can't pretend and say don't know
Yes, it won't make our story reflow
Yet, it doesn't matter
I just want you to know
You're my missing piece and I love you so.

^awwww... wonderful way of ending your poem here. the last line it was realie touching and beauitful. i enjoyed reading it indeed =] keep up the great work.

5/5
TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy