Silvia,

I like to support you by commenting to your every poem, but this one is a little hard for me sweetheart:(
Let's just say you have used beautiful words and really made the picture come to life.

Have a blessed 2009, sweet lady

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Sylvia this is one of the truest dedications that i have ever read, and written about one of the nicest most honest and upstanding people i can think of, and one who i am proud to call son.
What a sweet and wonderfull person you are well written and well done

Grant

You have written in so many forms which I
am yet to try! This one especially I really
like and the story that unfolds. As always
a read worth reading :D

Sivlia,

I realize my first comment may have sounded a little unkind.
I assure you it has nothing to do with the quality of you work. The content reminds me of someone I have known and that broke my heart three times in a row, that's all.
I absolutly adore your poetry:)

*hugs*

Ingrid

Well by reading this poem, it's like taking up my album photos of the past. Sylvia you tramsmits the love of words to my mind and my heart feed upon it. very well done. 5/5, kel.