by Alicia Dec 29, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
She watches them from day to day. |
Wow. Alicia your poetry has improved alot and I miss you so much!! |
This is an amazing poem with so many different meanings. It seems (besides the obvious) that you mostly are talking about lives that have been broken. That people just look away when they don't want to see something, possibly blinded by some unseen force (puppet master) or just because they don't wish to look. When the "strings are cut", its kind of talking about when someone finally gives up, or when they've been so broken that they're body can't take the pain anymore (emotionally, or physically). Also, that its happening everywhere, to everyone, but people are so blinded by their own lives or things that only effect them that they don't realize whats happening till its too late. I loved this. Its amazing, and the story is beautifully written. Great job. |