Mental Abilities

Wow i like the idea of seeing the world and it's obstacles from the point of view of people who has mental disabilities...It is really a refreshing insight to see the troubles and struggles than they have to face everyday and the things that is running through their mind.This poem was such a delight to read and i think you have pennned it down wonderfully.

Excellent Job

"Most often sees passed the facade"
passed = pass

"The lesser child of an awesome God
Most often sees passed the facade
Feeling pain with a heart that's pure
There is no shame in the cure

So what if I am mentally unstable
With steadfast faith I should be able
Happy in the hope of the divine grace
Leading me onward to a holy place"

- I adored these lines. The first line, oh man it captured me so much. It was like a cherry ontop of the sundae. I think that the rest of the poem was okay, a bit blunt if you ask me. But, that's okay the last two stanzas absolutely, no question about it made up for that. Maybe that's what you were trying to do? Even if you weren't I like the idea of doing this. I've thought of it but I've never done it. The whole 'blahblahblah, WOWOWOW' thing. I'm not quite sure that's the way of putting it for this poem. It wasn't 'blah' it was just blunt, eh.

Waw reading this poem thousand of thoughts engross my mind make words so hard to find." Some seek comfort in the mind
While the heart seems so blind
When we are forced to make choices
Deep inside we hear the voices." This is absolutely beautiful and meaningful. Very well done 5/5, kel.