by Lonely Rider
"But it don't keep me warm at night. |
by Zeus
Favorite line: "He cries, 'I let the bottle win, |
I like the structure of this poem though I have been there and done that thkis poem serves as a reminder that alcohol or drugs never made me happy and is a very poor substitute for love. I don't glorify my past nor does this very well written poem |
by Cyber Saiyan
This is a good start to a new poem. |
by Lady Nik
He sits down on the sidewalk, |