"The road is dark, and my journey long.

So i softly hum, a broken song."

- No need for commas.

"Not now not ever, till my very last breath."
[Not now, not ever till my very last breath]

Great poem. :) (:

The title does go with the poem, btw. I guess you have to understand the meaning and such to get it. (Or at least the meaning I get from the way it's written). Considering the way you've described his emotion and journey, there is no resolution. It's but his destiny awaiting him... or making him live what he is living for some cases.