by Nikkicola Dec 30, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
Hey this just a little bit of a poem story that I'm writting it's chapter 1 and its called Lost Between Two Forbidden Worlds...Tell me if I should continue it :-) |
I like it. it flows really well :) one suggestion i have, is where is says in the first section: wore out, try saying worn out instead. it might sound better ^^ i'm really interested in this and i would love for you to continue. |